Episode Transcript

Hyphens
Episode 93: February 01, 2008

Grammar Girl here.
 
Today's topic is hyphens.
 
On Monday afternoon Pat was watching the cable channel CNBC and called me over to the TV because the hosts were talking about hyphens. Yup, in the middle of a segment on the economy, they started talking about hyphens because the ticker read something like Is the glass half full or half empty? The original ticker had half full and half empty without hyphens, and then the next minute the words showed up with hyphens.
 
You could see evidence of a hyphen debate taking place right on the screen. Clearly one person who had control of the ticker favored hyphens and another person who also had control of the ticker did not.
The hosts noticed and started talking about it themselves. Fun stuff!
 
It turns out the first person was on the right track. In the sentence Is the glass half full? you don't need a hyphen between half and full. However, if we put the words half full before the word glass so that they are acting as a compound modifier, then it makes sense to use a hyphen. The sentence would read He was holding a half-full glass.
 
Now, the detail-oriented people among you will notice that I didn't say anyone was right or wrong, and I didn't use strong words such as should hyphenate or must hyphenate. I chose my words carefully because the rules about hyphens can hardly be called rules; there are so many exceptions it's making me crazy.
 
The safest thing to do when you're unsure about hyphenating is to look the words up in a dictionary. For example, the Oxford English Dictionary generally recommends hyphenating half-full when it comes before a noun and not hyphenating it otherwise, but the dictionary also shows exceptions. It's also common for published and in-house style guides to have a list of compound words that should be hyphenated. For example, The Chicago Manual of Style has a long guide to hyphenation and states that most compounds that begin with the word half are hyphenated when they come before nouns. So, my advice is to check a dictionary or style guide, but if you don't have one handy, follow the rule that you hyphenate compound modifiers when they come before a noun, and don't hyphenate them when they come after a noun.
 
Here's another example:
·       They were in a long-term relationship. (In that sentence, I hyphenated long-term because it comes before the noun relationship. Long-term is a compound adjective that modifies the word relationship.)
·       Their relationship was long term. (No hyphen. I didn't hyphenate long term because it comes after the noun.)
Sometimes it is especially important to hyphenate the compound modifier because words can mean different things depending on the hyphenation. When you hyphenate the words, you are applying them as a single unit to the noun.
 
For example, there's a difference between a hot-water bottle with a hyphen and a hot water bottle without a hyphen. When you hyphenate hot-water, you're making it a single compound modifier that applies to the word bottle. It's a bottle for holding hot water. But when you don't hyphenate hot water, the words are separate modifiers and you're describing a water bottle that is currently hot.
·       A hot-water bottle is a bottle for holding hot water.
·       A hot water bottle is a water bottle that is hot.
Always consider whether hyphenation will affect your meaning.
 
Meaning also matters when you are trying to decide whether to use a hyphen within a word. For example, if you didn't press your jeans properly and you need to re-press them, you would write that with a hyphen: I need to re-press my jeans. Otherwise, people might think you mean the verb repress meaning "to stifle or put down." You re-press jeans, but repress bad memories.
 
·       You need to re-press your jeans.
·       You need to repress those bad memories.
A dictionary is also helpful for figuring out less obvious cases of in-word hyphenation. Fortunately, there are at least a few solid rules. You use a hyphen when when you're joining a prefix to a word that must be capitalized and when joining a letter to a word. For example, you use a hyphen in
·       Anti-American
·       Un-American
·       Pre-Mesozoic
·       X-ray
·       A-list
·       T-shirt
Also, you use hyphens to write out numbers from twenty-one to ninety-nine. For example
·       Thirty-five
·       Sixty-four
·       Ninety-three
Hyphens are a complicated topic and I promise I'll do another show about other hyphen questions in the future.
 
We finally have book winners again this week! I'm giving away three copies of a book called How to Say It: Business Writing That Works by Adina Gewirtz. I really enjoyed Adina's writing style, and the book walks you through a helpful outlining system to make your business writing better. The winners are Mia, Dave C., and Bob M. who were entered in the drawing because they are subscribed to the free e-mail newsletter. You can subscribe through the blue button in the left-hand sidebar at QuickAndDirtyTips.com, and I'll put a link to Adina's book, Business Writing That Works, in the transcript for this show.
 
 
That's all. Thanks for listening.
References
half. Oxford English Dictionary. Second edition. Oxford University Press, http://tinyurl.com/29dol6 (accessed January 31, 2008).
 
Garner, B.A. "Grammar and Usage." The Chicago Manual of Style, Chicago: The University of Chicago Press, 2006, section 5.92. http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org (accessed January 31, 2008).
 
Lutz, G. and Stevenson, D. Grammar Desk Reference. Cincinnati:Writer's Digest Books, 2004, p. 276.
 
Quinion, M. "Hyphen." World Wide Words. http://www.worldwidewords.org/topicalwords/tw-hyp1.htm (accessed January 31, 2008).
 
Shaw, H. Punctuate It Right. New York: HarperPaperbacks, 1993, p. 89-95.

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jessica cruz Says:
9/13/2008 9:59:47 PM
Would u have a hyphen or a dash between Scotland-born?
Anne Ludwig Says:
7/3/2008 2:46:44 PM
Is never the less hyphenated?
Tammy Says:
6/26/2008 12:46:27 PM
Hi Grammer Girl Which would be correct: small- to medium-sized businesses, or, small to medium-sized busisnesses (only one hyphen)?
Joe Says:
5/26/2008 2:49:59 PM
Would you hyphenate "brick oven pizza kitchen" or brick oven pizza"?
johnboy Says:
4/30/2008 9:02:56 AM
Hello Grammar Girl, you often use the phrase "quick and dirty tip". I am wondering whether it shouldn't be "quick-and-dirty tip", treating quick-and-dirty as a compound adjective. Of course, one can argue that it's simply a tip that's both quick and dirty. But I think "quick-and-dirty" has turned into a fixed phrase. For example, one might say that your approach to grammar is "a quick-and-dirty approach". If I had written "a quick and dirty approach", it means something else. And I think in your usage it's the first one.
Regulator Says:
4/29/2008 2:08:28 PM
Which is correct: principle-based reserves or principles-based reserves? Thanks.
Jennifer Says:
2/19/2008 6:08:40 PM
rpmason - thanks for your response. I completely agree. Unfortunately the first version (i.e. "then serving") runs rampant throughout documents I review. I guess my only remedy is to fix it where I can!
rpmason Says:
2/19/2008 10:49:33 AM
Jennifer, I would hyphenate it. Does each word separately modify 'directors' or does the word 'then' modify 'serving'? You could describe them as 'the serving directors' but I, personally, wouldn’t describe them as 'the then directors', although others might. A contrasting example is 'a large orange ball'. It's a large ball and it's an orange ball, therefore no hyphen.
Jennifer Says:
2/18/2008 5:40:01 PM
What about the adjective "then"? For example, which of the following is correct? "Succeeding directos shall be elected by the then serving directors." "Succeding directors shall be elected by the then-serving directors." Thanks!
Lisa Says:
2/7/2008 1:12:51 PM
by the way....I'm from Brazil. :) Love you all.
Lisa Says:
2/7/2008 1:10:30 PM
I've just come across this pod cast. It's great! I've lived in the US for five years and it's so nice to listen to native speakers. It's keeps me up dated regarding my English skill. Tks a lot!
rpmason Says:
2/6/2008 4:13:12 PM
Hope you get well soon!
Grammar Girl Says:
2/6/2008 1:44:10 PM
Hi, Kerry. The Associate Press Stylebook is an outlier on hyphenation style. I have four other sources that don't recommend hyphenating compounds that follow a form of the verb "to be." (And I was saving the part about not using hyphens for compounds that end in "ly" for a second episode about hyphens. There is too much to say about this punctuation mark for one episode!)
Grammar Girl Says:
2/6/2008 1:36:02 PM
Hi, Jeep. Sorry about the sound in this episode. I have a bad cold, and I was probably turning my head away from the mic so you couldn't hear me gasping for air between sentences.
rpmason Says:
2/6/2008 1:15:51 PM
I'm not a journalist and so have never owned an AP Style and Libel Manual (props to Anthony Peyton Porter for that name). "Compounds generally should be hyphenated ... when they follow a conjugation of the verb 'to be' (e.g. "the glass is half-full")." Omigosh, I am taken-aback.
Kerry Says:
2/5/2008 2:30:21 PM
I was surprised that many of the examples in this week's episode flagrantly violated a clear rule in Associated Press style, used by most newspapers and many other publications around the country: Compounds generally should be hyphenated not only when they precede the term they modify (e.g. "half-full glass"), but also when they follow a conjugation of the verb "to be" (e.g. "the glass is half-full"). Additionally, no hyphen should be used when the first word in the compound modifier is an adverb ending in "-ly." Was Grammar Girl simply unaware of these rules under A.P. style, or is A.P. unusual in this regard? I'm uncertain of what other style guides say on this topic because I hold fairly firmly to A.P. style (except when I consciously decide to make an exception for my house style, such as removing the [IMO] ridiculous-looking hyphens in "teen-ager" and "e-mail") -- and I didn't get the answer in this week's podcast episode.
Eric Says:
2/5/2008 1:20:32 PM
Heidi asked what was wrong with the follwoing sentence: "On weekends, either I or one of my partners will be available 24 hours a day." Nothing really, but I would say, "On weekends, one of my partners or I will be available 24 hours a day."
jeep Says:
2/5/2008 4:25:37 AM
What happened to the audio for this episode? I think that you generally have good audio, but in this one it sounds like you are pacing in front of the mic.
Heidi Says:
2/4/2008 10:59:56 PM
What's wrong with this sentence: On weekends, either I or one of my partners will be available 24 hours a day.
Lilie Says:
2/4/2008 2:18:49 PM
Wow! I actually never paid attention to hyphen, but now, I think that I must pay attention to grammar in general :). Thanks for the tips,Grammar Girl, they have really helped me.
Matt Keegan Says:
2/4/2008 1:51:04 PM
The glass is always half full! Look at the positive side of things, not the negative. As far the hyphen goes, I would leave it out.
Jeff Davis Says:
2/2/2008 9:38:40 AM
Perhaps the glass is twice as large as necessary?
Anonymous Says:
2/1/2008 4:17:31 PM
Grammar Girl, I've been wanting to alert you to a hyphen controversy but you beat me by putting out an episode on the topic so I hope this gets addressed in your next episode on it. Now, a government agency a few years ago changed its name. It used to be the National Imagery and Mapping Agency. For various reasons, the name was changed to the National Geospatial-Intelligence Agency (www.nga.mil). I'm pretty sure the agency coined the term geospatial, although it may have been an informal word they latched on to. Nevertheless, that is the name. The agency previously was abbreviated as NIMA. Now it is abbreviated as NGA. Internally, some criticized this as a move just so the agency could be a "three-letter agency" (because supposedly they have more clout). So, some say it should be NGIA, and others say because of the hyphen NGA is legit. Now, used outside of the name, the phrase itself is not hyphenated. For instance, do you know what geospatial intelligence is? Debate on this still simmers at times and some even insist that, if a hyphen is used, it should be National-Geospatial-Intelligence Agency -- hyphens throughout! (They're trying to point to the ludicrous nature of the hyphen, in their eyes.) So, what's your take on this? And finally, it is correct to say "geospatial-intelligence analysis" not "geospatial intelligence analysis", right?
rpmason Says:
2/1/2008 4:13:37 PM
I'm moderately techie and prefer 'email', but use 'e-mail' formally. It's typical of many words that make a slow slide from words with a hyphenated prefix to single compound word, like 'pre-eminent' to 'preeminent'. Sorry for the odd example but I had to use that word today.
rpmason Says:
2/1/2008 3:53:21 PM
I just realized I lied in my previous comment. The podcast does go beyond the compound-modifier topic. Grr. Sorry!
rpmason Says:
2/1/2008 3:50:30 PM
Great treatise. Rather than the simple title of 'Hyphens', maybe it should be 'Hyphenating Compound Modifiers' since it doesn't go outside that topic. But I digress. Compound modifiers beginning with an adverb that ends in 'ly' are not hyphenated. Examples: gravely ill person, lazily moving river. I think the reasoning is that the 'ly' already denotes that it's modifying the noun's adjective or participle (ill, moving).
Eric Says:
2/1/2008 2:01:26 PM
The glass is neither half full nor half empty. The glass is twice as large as it needs to be. Add to the your woes of when-to-hyphen and when-not-to-hyphen this tidbit from a proposal writing instructor: If the reader is well-informed of the technical term, do not use hyphens for words you might hyphenate for general audiences. For example, the center-of-gravity is used by many, except in the technical circles where it is just the center of gravity.
Grammar Girl Says:
2/1/2008 12:17:02 PM
Hi, Larry. I wish there were a single rule about how to capitalize hyphenated words in titles! It's another area where style guides waffle. For example, The Chicago Manual of Style provides two different options, and one of the options includes the advice "Break a rule when it doesn't work." The rule I tend to use is to capitalize the second half of a compound in a title if I would capitalize the word if it stood alone.
Grammar Girl Says:
2/1/2008 12:03:44 PM
Hi, Larry. I prefer "e-mail," but as you note, the hyphen is controversial. Most traditionalists use a hyphen, but many techies don't. It's a topic that should be covered in every house style guide because people will argue about it if left to their own devices.
Larry Says:
2/1/2008 10:10:33 AM
This episode brings up a question I have been wondering about: how should I capitalize hyphenated words in titles? For example, if these were books, should I write "Long-term Relationships" or "Long-Term Relationships"; "The Case of the Half-full Glass" or "The Case of the Half-Full Glass"?
Larry Says:
2/1/2008 9:56:39 AM
I notice your list of examples doesn't include another controversial word: e-mail. I most often see it written as "email", but that just looks wrong to me. It looks like the "e" in "email" should be pronounced short, as "eh mail". What do you think?

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