Episode Transcript

How to Use Semicolons
Episode 189: September 22, 2009

Grammar Girl here. Surprise! You get a bonus show today because Thursday is National Punctuation Day and I'm going to have a slightly different kind of podcast to celebrate.

Today's topic is semicolons.

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I get a lot of questions about semicolons, so it's time to clear up some confusion.

Semicolons Separate Clauses

Semicolons separate things. Most commonly, they separate two main clauses that are closely related to each other but could stand on their own as sentences if you wanted them to

Here's an example:

I have a big test tomorrow; I can't go out tonight.

The two clauses in that sentence are separated by a semicolon and could be sentences on their own if you put a period between them instead:

I have a big test tomorrow. I can't go out tonight.

Semicolons Create Variety

One reason you might choose to use a semicolon instead of a period is if you wanted to add variety to your sentence structure; for example, you might use a semicolon if you thought you had too many short, choppy sentences in a row.

Semicolons Emphasize Relatedness

Another reason to use a semicolon is to draw attention to how related your two clauses are. The semicolon in our example sentence highlights that the reason you can't go out tonight is that you have a big test tomorrow. You wouldn't write, “English is my fifth period class; I can't go out tonight,” because those two main clauses have nothing to do with each other. I can't think of a single reason why English being fifth period would mean you can't go out tonight.

Semicolons and Coordinating Conjunctions

You should never use a semicolon and a coordinating conjunction such as “and,” “so,” and “but” to join two main clauses; that's the job of a comma. If you want to use a coordinating conjunction you'd write it like this:

I have a big test tomorrow, so I can't go out tonight.

Nevertheless, there are a couple of instances where it's OK to use a semicolon with a coordinating conjunction.

Semicolons Can Join Complex Clauses with a Coordinating Conjunction

First, if you have a long sentence with multiple independent clauses, and some of those clauses contain internal punctuation such as a comma, you can use a semicolon with a coordinating conjunction to make the separation between clauses more clear. Here's an example:

If you want me to go out tonight, you need to help me with my homework first; and if you say no, I'll know that you don't really care about going out.

Because each half of that long sentence has a conditional clause that must contain a comma, it's OK to use a semicolon before the “and” that separates those two parts. You could make them two sentences, but you don't have to; and because they are so closely related, it makes a lot of sense to have them be together separated by the semicolon. The “and” after the semicolon is actually optional in this case, but I think it adds to the flow of the sentence.

Semicolons Can Separate Items in a Complex List

The second instance in which it's OK to use a semicolon with a coordinating conjunction also occurs when you have an excess of commas: it's when you need to separate list elements that contain commas.

Here's an example:

This week's winners are Joe from Reno, Nevada; Diane from Phoenix, Arizona; and Matt from Irvine, California.

Because each item in the list requires a comma to separate the city from the state, you have to use a semicolon to separate the items themselves.

Notice again that both times you can use a semicolon with a coordinating conjunction such as “and,” it's because commas are already being used for something else, so using a comma could be confusing to readers.

Semicolons with Conjunctive Adverbs and Transitional Phrases

Finally, you use a semicolon when you use a conjunctive adverb or transitional phrase to join two main clauses.

Conjunctive adverbs are words such as “however,” “therefore,” and “indeed,” and they "usually show cause and effect, sequence, contrast, comparison, or other relationships" (1). For example, “I have a big test tomorrow; therefore, I can't go out tonight.” (The comma after the conjunctive adverb is optional.)

A transitional phrase is something like “for example” or “in other words.” A sentence with a transitional phrase could read as follows:

I have a big test tomorrow; as a result, I can't go out tonight.

Coordinating Conjunctions Versus Conjunctive Adverbs

Sometimes people seem frustrated because they have to remember to use commas with coordinating conjunctions and semicolons with conjunctive adverbs most of the time. If you can't keep the difference straight in your head, it can help to remember that commas are smaller than semicolons and go with coordinating conjunctions, which are almost always short two- or three-letter words—small words, small punctuation mark.

Semicolons are bigger and they go with conjunctive adverbs and transitional phrases, which are almost always longer than three letters—bigger words, bigger punctuation. I'll put a list of the different kinds of connectors on the website.

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That's all. Thanks for listening.

References

1. Wikipedia contributors. "Conjunctive Adverb," Wikipedia, The Free Encyclopedia, en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Conjunctive_adverb&oldid=108619955 (accessed February 23, 2007).

Common Coordinating Conjunctions
Common Conjunctive Adverbs
Common Transitional Phrases
Use these with commas to join main clauses
Use these with semicolons to join main clauses
Use these with semicolons to join main clauses
and
accordingly
after all
but
again
as a matter of fact
nor
also
as a result
or
besides
at any rate
so
consequently
at the same time
yet
finally
even so
for
furthermore
for example
 
hence
for instance
 
however
in addition
 
incidentally
in conclusion
 
indeed
in fact
 
likewise
in other words
 
moreover
in the first place
 
namely
in the meantime
 
nevertheless
of course
 
nonetheless
on the contrary
 
otherwise
on the other hand
 
similarly
 
 
still
 
 
that is
 
 
then
 
 
therefore
 
 
thus
 

More Semicolon-Related Reading

France Debates the Future of the Semicolon (April 4, 2008)

Comments (9) for How to Use Semicolons |  Subscribe to Comment

donna Says:
10/4/2009 11:59:32 PM
Helps me with transitional sentences. It is hard for me to know when to use a semi-colon or colon. This explanation makes sense.
Sally Says:
9/27/2009 5:55:43 PM
Hey!! I've read the "On the writing well" book, and it is so~~~~~~~~~ good!!!!! I recommend it to you!
Kimberly Says:
9/25/2009 3:21:14 PM
I was taught that you could memorize all the coordinating conjunctions with the mnemonic device BOYSFAN (but, or, yet, so, for, and, nor).
Peter Dallman Says:
9/24/2009 1:15:03 PM
Great work. If you could have included choosing between the (:) and (;); or when to use one vs. the other it would have been perfect! PS. I had trouble constructing the sentences when needing : and ; as object and parts of the actual sentence punctuation.
Grammar Girl Says:
9/23/2009 12:59:56 PM
Here's a link to the show I did about formatting vertical lists: http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/formatting-vertical-lists.aspx
Diane Says:
9/23/2009 8:14:03 AM
I have the same question as the previous writer: What is the correct way to punctuate a bulleted list (or is there not a "correct" way as long as you're consistent throughout the document)?
julie Says:
9/22/2009 3:30:48 PM
Thanks for the bonus, GG; it was a nice addition to my day. A word of caution, though: the use of semicolons with conjunctive adverbs above is really an extension of the first tip. The clause on either side of the semicolon can stand alone. Don't use a semicolon in a sentence like "I, however, prefer to use the more emphatic colon."
Wilson Says:
9/22/2009 3:27:11 PM
Argh! That post was nicely formatted when I sent it! Grr.
Wilson Says:
9/22/2009 3:25:50 PM
2 thoughts and a question, on 'Items in a complex list': I like to signal my complex lists with a colon. So my version of your example would be: This week's winners are: Joe from Reno, Nevada; Diane from Phoenix, Arizona; and Matt from Irvine, California. Actually, in recent years, I've come to find that bulleted or numbered lists are much more readable, so my version would *actually* be: This week's winners are: - Joe from Reno, Nevada; - Diane from Phoenix, Arizona; and - Matt from Irvine, California. That being said, I've never been entirely certain of the rules (or are they just conventions?) of punctuating lists. In the example above, I just left the semicolons where they were, but I have been known both to use commas and to leave list items entirely unpunctuated* (except for a period on the last item), though not at the same time. I hope. Do you have an opinion on punctuating bullet list items? Wilson *Interesting: my spell checker recognizes 'punctuated' but not 'unpunctuated'. Is it not a word?

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