Episode Transcript

Starting a Sentence With "However"
Episode 58: May 29, 2007

Grammar Girl here.

Today's topic is how to use the word however in a sentence. It's probably more complicated than you think it is.

The question I get asked most frequently about however is whether it is OK to use however at the beginning of a sentence, and the answer is yes: it is fine to use however at the beginning of a sentence; you just need to know when to use a comma.

The comma is important because however is a conjunctive adverb that can be used in two different ways: it can be a conjunction that joins main clauses, or it can be an adverb that modifies a clause.

If you use however at the beginning of a sentence and don't insert a comma, however means “in whatever manner” or “to whatever extent.”

For instance, in 1674 Nicolas Boileau wrote, “However big the fool, there is always a bigger fool to admire him,” and in 1860 Ivan Turgenev wrote, “However much you knock at nature's door, she will never answer you in comprehensible words.” In both of those sentences, however isn't playing a role as a conjunction. It's not joining anything to anything else. I don't think anyone has ever disputed starting a sentence with however when it is used this way.

On the other hand, the esteemed grammarians Strunk and White did say in their book, The Elements of Style, that you shouldn't start a sentence with however when you mean “nevertheless.” Most of the time people stick with Strunk and White, but this is one rare instance where the majority of modern writers have decided that the classic advice is unreasonable (1, 2, 3, 4, 5).

Here's why: when you put a comma after however at the beginning of a sentence, everyone knows it means “nevertheless.” There's no reason to outlaw a perfectly reasonable use of the word when you can solve the problem with a comma! Some writers have even gone so far as to say it is preferable to start sentences with however instead of burying the word in the middle of a sentence, because putting it at the beginning makes the connection between sentences more clear and therefore makes the text easier to scan (6).

Here are some examples of sentences from famous works that start with however when the writer means “nevertheless”:

  • Robert Pirsig wrote this in the introduction to the book Zen and The Art of Motorcycle Maintenance: “What follows is based on actual occurrences. However, it should in no way be associated with that great body of factual information relating to orthodox Zen Buddhist practice.”
  • Charles Dickens wrote this in Nicholas Nickleby: “It is a great deal easier to go down hill than up. However,  they kept on, with unabated perseverance.”


As an aside, it's also acceptable to start a sentence with coordinating conjunctions like and, but, and so. It's a somewhat informal style, and it's a good idea not to overdo it in business writing, but it's not wrong (7, 8, 9).

And let me add a bit more about business writing: Despite the fact that it's not wrong to start a sentence with however, a lot of people think it's wrong; so I wouldn't advise doing it in a really important situation where you don't know the people you are writing for and you won't get a chance to defend yourself. For example, I wouldn't start a sentence with however in a cover letter for a job. I'd rather be hired than be right.

If you want to avoid starting a sentence with however, it's not hard to do—just grab a semicolon and use it to connect your two main clauses. What I mean is that instead of putting a period at the end of the sentence before the however, put a semicolon there instead. For example, Dickens wrote, “It's a great deal easier to go down hill than up. However, they kept on,” but he just as easily could have put a semicolon in place of the period and written, “It's a great deal easier to go down hill than up; however, they kept on.”   

You can also bury a however that means “nevertheless” in the middle of your sentence. You might do this to avoid using it at the beginning when you are insecure about your audience or you might do it because it makes sense with the rhythm of your sentence.

For example, Dickens buried the however in this sentence from Nicholas Nickelby: “Love, however, is very materially assisted by a warm and active imagination.”

When you put however in the middle of a sentence like this, it should be surrounded by commas.

Here's another example: in Breakfast of Champions, Kurt Vonnegut wrote, “The chief weapon of sea pirates, however, was their capacity to astonish. Nobody else could believe, until it was too late, how heartless and greedy they were.” www.quotationspage.com/quote/35408.html

Again, put a comma before and after however when you use it in the middle of a sentence this way. This is one area where people get confused because sometimes you need a semicolon before however in the middle of a long sentence and sometimes you need a comma before however in the middle of a long sentence. Just remember that you only use the semicolon when you are joining two main clauses and the however just happens to be in the way shouting “nevertheless.” As I said in the episode on semicolons, think of a semicolon as a sentence splicer—it splices together two main clauses.

So remember, don't let anyone tell you that it's wrong to start a sentence with however. On the other hand, it might be a good idea to avoid the practice if you're applying for a job since a lot of people mistakenly believe that it is wrong. Mind your commas and semicolons, and don't use any punctuation after however when you use it to mean “in whatever manner” or “to whatever extent.”

That's all.

I got carried away searching famous quotations for examples this week, so there are more examples at QuickAndDirtyTips.com.

This week Modern Manners and Legal Lad did a special joint episode about how to handle problems with your neighbors. If you've ever wondered how to politely tell your neighbors to trim their tree--and sue their pants off if they refuse--this is a show for you.
 
My e-mail address is feedback@quickanddirtytips.com, and my voice-mail line is 206-338-GIRL. Thanks for listening.

References

  1. however. Dictionary.com. The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language. Fourth Edition. Boston: Houghton Mifflin Company, 2004. dictionary.reference.com/browse/however (accessed: May 26, 2007).
  2. Aaron, J. The Little, Brown Essential Handbook. New York: Pearson Education, 2006, p. 71, p. 231.
  3.  Scharton, M. and Neuleib, J. Things Your Grammar Never Told You. Second edition. New York: Pearson Education, 2001, p. 77.  
  4. Spina, G. The Mountain Man's Field Guide to Grammar. Naperville: Sourcebooks, 2006, p.221.
  5.  Hacker, D. “However at the beginning of a sentence.” The Language Debates. www.dianahacker.com/rules/subpages_language/however.html (accessed May 26, 2007).
  6.  Henning, K.  “Writing for Readers Who Scan.” The Click Z Network. February 6, 2001. www.clickz.com/showPage.html?page=836621 (accessed May 26,2007).
  7. Stilman, A. Grammatically Correct. Cincinnati: Writer's Digest Books, 2004, p. 262.
  8. Lutz, G. and  Stevenson, D. Grammar Desk Reference. Cincinnati: Writer's Digest Books, 2005, p.42.
  9. Nordquist, R. "'But'--It's a Wonderful Word." About.com Grammar and Composition. August 4, 2008. http://is.gd/1nTG (accessed August 10, 2008).

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    Web Bonus: Extra Examples

    However (“to whatever extent” or “in whatever manner”) starting a sentence

    Let them be. Let them lie unspoken of, in his breast. However distinctly or indistinctly he entertained these thoughts, he arrived at the conclusion, Let them be. Among the mighty store of wonderful chains that are for ever forging, day and night, in the vast iron-works of time and circumstance, there was one chain forged in the moment of that small conclusion, riveted to the foundations of heaven and earth, and gifted with invincible force to hold and drag. Charles Dickens, The Mystery of Edwin Drood.

    However (“nevertheless”) starting a sentence

    However, never daunted, I will cope with adversity in my traditional manner ... sulking and nausea.
    Tom K. Ryan (Creator of the Tumbleweeds comic strip)

    However (“to whatever extent” or “in whatever manner”) in the middle of a sentence

    I have learned never to ridicule any man's opinion, however strange it may seem. Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, The Captain of the Polestar.

    If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away. Henry David Thoreau, Walden.

    How often have I said to you that when you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth? Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (Sherlock Holmes) The Sign of Four.

    A bear, however hard he tries, grows tubby without exercise. Pooh's Little Instruction Book, inspired by A. A. Milne.

    Every author, however modest, keeps a most outrageous vanity chained like a madman in the padded cell of his breast. Logan Pearsall Smith.

    The moment a man sets his thoughts down on paper, however secretly, he is in a sense writing for publication. Raymond Chandler.

    However (“nevertheless”) in the middle of a sentence with commas

    There are, it has been said, two types of people in the world. There are those who, when presented with a glass that is exactly half full, say: this glass is half full. And then there are those who say: this glass is half empty. The world belongs, however, to those who can look at the glass and say: What's up with this glass? Excuse me? Excuse me? This is my glass? I don't think so. My glass was full! And it was a bigger glass! Terry Pratchett, The Truth.

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HyunJu Says:
9/9/2009 5:47:33 PM
I am curious about the usage difference between conjuntive words "on the contrary" and "in contrast"
ana Says:
9/1/2009 10:48:24 AM
I need help trying to start a letter to my principal.
Mac6737 Says:
8/27/2009 4:43:12 PM
This statement is dead wrong: "The comma is important because however is a conjunctive adverb that can be used in two different ways: it can be a conjunction that joins main clauses, or it can be an adverb that modifies a clause." However is NOT a conjunction and can never join two independent clauses! Don't take my word for it, however. Dozens of other (authoritative) sources back me up. And so, I agree with the principal point in your article, however this very sentence is grammatically incorrect. .
Yolanda Martinez Says:
8/24/2009 6:44:26 PM
I would like to know if there is a light difference between the meanings of however or nevertheless. Or they are exactly the same meaning.
Mr Jon Says:
8/7/2009 11:58:42 AM
Perhaps the hill that Dickens writes of was so steep that only a full stop would do.
Davies Says:
5/8/2009 6:09:42 AM
To me, starting a sentance with "however", is like starting a sentance with "but". It often doesn't make sense (though there are, of course, many instances where both are correct). It would be very easy to try to blame this on the Americanisation of our language, but as the above texts show, prominent English writers have been making the same mistake for centuries. I stick with Strunk and White, mainly because it goes along with what I believe to be correct. It also comes down to a set of rules that have been disagreed with and then ignored. There really is no point in putting rules in place if nobody is going to stick to them.
Hugh Says:
4/22/2009 11:46:00 PM
to me was given a book containing the title which to me was not known before the gifting of said book given the curious name of "Elements, the Style of said given"
Bill Says:
4/22/2009 11:37:40 PM
Little Brown beats White Strunk Hands down.
ILOVEGRAMMAR Says:
12/2/2008 9:41:47 PM
Dear Grammar Girl, I LOVE YOU! YOU ARE SO AWESOME! Olivia
Lori Says:
10/20/2008 11:57:41 PM
My son's 4th grade teacher doesn't seem to correct his obvious writing errors. She did make one recent correction on a paper about his favorite holiday and I'm not sure I agree with her comment. My son wrote "Christmas is not all about getting, it's also about giving." Her one correction on the paper was to add the word "however" after "getting" so that it reads "Christmas is not all about getting, however, it's also about giving". Can you please tell me if her addition of "however" into his sentence is correct grammar? It doesn't sound right to me. Thank you!
Suzanne Says:
5/19/2008 12:14:21 PM
@Sammy -- there is nothing wrong with the first sentence, and nothing wrong with Grammar Girl's rules. "Perhaps life is purposeless, however much of an absurdist saying that makes me." "However much" in this case means "to whatever extent". *** The rest of your post is just silly. Come on! "Unless you want to explain to me how either of those supplementary sentences is correct, I will simply believe the quote is correct as is." Um, dude, it is correct, because of the meaning of "however"!
Sammy Says:
5/11/2008 8:43:10 PM
Please help me with this then, "Perhaps life is purposeless, however much of an absurdist saying that makes me." I skimmed through your explanations here, but Perhaps life is purposeless; however, much of an absurdist that makes me. and Perhaps life is purposeless, however , much of an absurdist that makes me. do not look or sound right. I think the explanations you have provided lack concrete backing and thus have exceptions. Unless you want to explain to me how either of those supplementary sentences is correct, I will simply believe the quote is correct as is. Sammy Mohamed p.s I do not know how this site works, so I am going to note now that I would prefer any responses by email. Thanks (=
Jeremy Says:
7/10/2007 12:25:55 AM
In this podcast, you used the phrase more clear. My understanding is that more clear is incorrect and that clearer is the correct version. Am I mistaken? Also, I imagine it's purely a question of personal style, but I would enjoy hearing your thoughts on it's not versus it isn't. Many Thanks. ----- --------
Vision Says:
6/16/2007 1:45:17 PM
Thanks aardvark! What would I do without you arrdvark. -----
aardvark Says:
6/15/2007 5:15:05 PM
Hi Vision, Your question several weeks ago had two parts. 1. You wanted to know about the difference between the words inquire and enquire. 2.You asked about the use of a question mark and whether is should be placed inside or outside quotation marks. You now have a new question that concerns the use of the comma and whether it should be placed inside or outside of quotation marks. The words " to seek information by questioning; to ask " were taken directly from Random House Webster's Unabridged Dictionary. They were not aardvark's words, so they should be enclosed in quotation marks. aardvark agrees with Harry Shaw in Punctuate It Right! when he says (and here goes another quotation), " The comma and period always come inside quotation marks. " (p.141) As we see often on this site, contradictions do exist in the world of grammar. In aardvark's advice, he tries to give listeners the most commonly observed rules. Thanks for looking at answers so carefully. This type of intellectual discourse is what makes us all better grammarians. Hope this helps. -----
Vision Says:
6/15/2007 3:47:01 AM
Opps, I mean Harper Collins Publishers, not Harper Collins publishers as seen above. -----
Vision Says:
6/15/2007 2:58:05 AM
Hello aardvark Thanks for the tips. However, I'm a bit perplexed in terms of quotation marks as "The Pocket Basic Book for English and Maths," by Lyn Magree which was published by Harper Collins publishers, notes that if the sentence contains only part of a quotation, the full stop is placed outside the final quote. If the whole sentence is a quotation then the full stop is placed inside the quotation marks. For example: 'I am the greatest.' - Muhammad Ali; in contrast to: She said the book was 'fascinating'. I quote from you: The first definition of enquire and inquire is, “to seek information by questioning; to ask." As you can see this is perplexing as the maxim you've used contradicts Harper Collins maxim. What are your opinions on this? Which one is most commonly used? Cheers. -----
aardvark Says:
6/2/2007 4:40:33 PM
aardvark would recommend italicizing enquire and inquire rather than using quotation marks. “Quotation marks are strong pieces of punctuation,” said aardvark. According to Warriner’s English Grammar and Composition (p. 562) one of the ways to correctly use quotation marks is “…to enclose slang words, technical terms, and other expressions that are unusual in standard English. Use this device sparingly.” As you can see, enquire and inquire do not fit into those categories. Were you to use quotation marks enclosing question marks or exclamation points, Warriner’s (p.562) continues with this rule: “ Question marks and explanation points are placed inside the closing quotation marks if the quotation is a question or an exclamation; otherwise, they are placed outside.” aardvark likes Warriner’s English Grammar and Composition because it was written for high school students and is easy to understand. Hope this helps. -----
aardvark Says:
6/2/2007 2:54:31 PM
According to the Random House Webster's Unabridged Dictionary (p.985), the verbs enquire and inquire have the same definition. Inquire is more commonly used than enquire, but both usages are acceptable. The first definition of enquire and inquire is, " to seek information by questioning; to ask." -----
Vision Says:
6/2/2007 3:49:32 AM
The question mark, in this instance, is supposed to appear inside the quotation mark right? Thanks. -----
Vision Says:
6/1/2007 9:49:10 AM
Just wondering if this is grammatically correct as quoted from above: "You just need know when to use a comma." Or is it supposed to be: "You just need to know when to use a comma." And what is the rule of use for "enquire" from "inquire"? Thanks. -----
aardvark Says:
5/31/2007 1:17:28 PM
If nevertheless is used in the middle of two independent clauses as a connector (formally called a conjunctive adverb), then you would use it as you would use however, with a semi-colon before it and a comma after. Squiggley is a snail that moves slowly; nevertheless, he arrives at all of my parties on time. If you are not using nevertheless to join to clauses, but rather to indicate however or in spite of or notwithstanding in the middle of the sentence, then just flanking it with commas works. Aardvark, nevertheless, continued on his merry way. -----
Patti Says:
5/30/2007 11:46:10 PM
Thanks. This is something I do incorrectly all the time. -----
Allison Says:
5/30/2007 11:15:47 PM
If there were any question as to the preference of the reader, why wouldn't one replace "however" with "nevertheless" anyway? If you use nevertheless would you follow the rules as if it were however? (e.g. would you put a comma after it and surround it by commas if it were in the middle of a sentence?) -----
Ray Ward Says:
5/29/2007 10:58:43 PM
That Bryan Garner fellow has an interesting essay on this topic in Garner's Modern American Usage, p. 414. He agrees that it's grammatically correct to start a sentence with "However," followed by a comma. But for stylistic reasons, he recommends changing the "However" to a "But" and dropping the comma. "However," he says, "is a ponderous way of introducing a contrast." I have to agree with Garner on this one. Of the following two sentences, I find (b) ponderous compared to (a): (a) But for stylistic reasons, he recommends changing the "However" to a "But" and dropping the comma. (b) However, for stylistic reasons, he recommends changing the "However" to a "But" and dropping the comma. -----
Zach Everson Says:
5/29/2007 3:02:56 PM
Great post about a common problem. While using and punctuating "however" is not one of the more egregious mistakes I encounter, it is one of the most common ones. -----

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