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Verbs Sandwiched Between Singular and Plural Nouns
Episode 183: August 14, 2009

 Grammar Girl here.

Today guest-writer Bonnie Trenga will help us talk about tricky sentences that make you question whether you should use a singular or plural verb.

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Today we’re talking about a tricky kind of sentence that causes you to make a mistake with subject-verb agreement. As we all learned in school, a singular subject agrees with a singular verb, and a plural subject agrees with a plural verb. Sometimes, though, other parts of the sentence get in the way and confuse you. Here's an example of the kind of sentence we’re talking about: “The star attractions at the museum were the art.” Or should it be “The star attractions at the museum was the art”?

Defining Our Problem

Before we can answer the “were” or “was” question in the museum sentence, we need to define the problem. The source of the conundrum is what’s called a distracting predicate noun. A predicate is what provides information about the subject (1). In the museum sentence, the predicate noun is “the art,” a singular word. The subject, “the star attractions,” on the other hand, is plural. So should the verb agree with the subject or the predicate noun?

Solving Our Problem

Although this problem may seem complicated, it’s really not. It’s as simple as this: the verb agrees with the subject (2), not the predicate noun. Therefore, “were” is correct in the museum sentence because the subject is “the star attractions,” a plural noun:

The star attractions in the museum were the art.

Dorothy, don’t pay attention to the man behind the curtain, meaning don’t be distracted by the predicate noun. One grammar source calls this problem “false attraction to a predicate noun” (3).

Let’s try out one more example. What’s the right verb here:

The real draw of this restaurant is the desserts.

or

The real draw of this restaurant are the desserts.

Well, you know not to be falsely attracted by “the desserts,” which is the predicate noun. Instead, let’s identify the subject; it’s “the real draw,” which is singular. Therefore, the verb must be “is”:

The real draw of this restaurant is the desserts.

What comes after the “is” doesn’t matter.

Avoiding Our Problem

Sentences that contain a singular subject and a plural predicate noun, or a plural subject and a singular predicate noun, often sound awkward. Take these two examples: “Her best feature is her legs,” and “Dirty diapers are the worst part of parenting.” Although these sentences are grammatically correct, they could make readers do a double take.

If you want to avoid the problem, just rewrite your sentence. You could try to make both the subject and the predicate noun singular, or both plural; if that doesn’t work, you’ll have to change the sentence. As far as the legs sentence, you probably shouldn't write, “Her best features are her legs,” or “Her best feature is her leg,” so if you wanted to rewrite it, you would have to change it. Perhaps “She has great legs” would suffice.

As far as the dirty diapers sentence, you could say, “Changing dirty diapers is the worst part of parenting,” among other things.

Summary

In summary, sometimes subject-verb agreement gets muddied by other parts of the sentence, but don’t let yourself become distracted. Determine whether the subject is singular or plural, and then match up your verb accordingly.

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This podcast was written by Bonnie Trenga, author of The Curious Case of the Misplaced Modifier, who blogs at sentencesleuth.blogspot.com, and I'm Mignon Fogarty, the author of the paperback book Grammar Girl's Quick and Dirty Tips for Better Writing.

References

1. Stilman, A. Grammatically Correct. Cincinnati: Writer's Digest Books, 2004, p. 211.

2. Lutz, G. and  Stevenson, D. Grammar Desk Reference. Cincinnati: Writer's Digest Books, 2005, p. 94.

3. Garner, B. Garner's Modern American Usage. Oxford: Oxford University Press. 2003, pp. 753-4.


Comments (15) for Verbs Sandwiched Between Singular and Plural Nouns |  Subscribe to Comment

CC Says:
11/19/2009 4:39:56 PM
Help! "A selection of beer and wine was available." This is correct. "Beer and wine were available." Is this correct or incorrect? Are they singular or plural nouns without ess?
Juliana Says:
8/29/2009 6:50:35 PM
My friends are claiming that I should use the word "is" instead of "are" in the following sentence: "Where are my 20 dollars." Are they right?
rpmason Says:
8/26/2009 1:26:31 PM
Lucy, lol. Your example is quite bizarre. My family, they are a-comin'.
Lucy Says:
8/20/2009 4:59:06 PM
carolp, I see that a lot too. This is treated differently in the UK and the US, however. In the UK, you hear people say things like "The band are going to play soon," where in the US it would be "The band is going to play soon." The latter, I believe, is more correct. On the other hand, what do you do when there's a situation like this? "My family is coming to visit. They're going to come to the zoo with me." That's what puzzles me. "My family is coming to visit. It's going to come to the zoo with me" is just bizarre, and we'd never say "My family is coming to visit. Its members are going to come to the zoo with me." Thoughts?
joe trotta Says:
8/18/2009 3:23:37 PM
grammar girl, I agree with your analysis, but I think you have confused the issue a bit - the examples you give actually have TWO distractions, 1) the predicate noun, which you have mentioned, 2) the subject of the verb is a noun phrase, the last word of which happens to be singular, ie in the noun phrase 'the star attractions at the museum', the head of the phrase is 'attractions', which rightfully determines the subj-verb agreement, but the phrase ends with a singular noun, 'museum'. The proximity of the words 'museum' and 'restaurant' to the verbs in your sentences can also cause problems, which is implicit in your discussion, but I think it's important to make it clear.
Peter Carter Says:
8/18/2009 5:24:25 AM
Often it helps to chop a sentence into simpler bits. For example, in Marie's posting above, you could rewrite the sentence as, "There are 61 million Americans who do not refill their prescriptions on time. I am not one of them." So, when you stick the two bits of the sentence together again - "I am not one of the 61 million Americans who do not refill their prescriptions on time."
carolp Says:
8/17/2009 11:53:04 AM
What I hear and see a lot is the wrong verb use afer the word "couple" such as, "The couple are on a honeymoon in Greece." Or, "The couple have two children."
rpmason Says:
8/17/2009 9:29:08 AM
Followup. Had the sentence ended with '...the art forms' or another plural then 'attractions were' would work.
rpmason Says:
8/17/2009 9:25:55 AM
uber, you're right. The plural doesn't work. It should be "The star attraction...was the art."
rpmason Says:
8/17/2009 9:14:27 AM
Marie, You can also break it down like this. "Sixty-one million Americans do not refill their prescriptions on time. I cannot be one of them."
Len Says:
8/16/2009 4:22:01 AM
Good post. As in many grammar rules, it often helps to remove the confusing bits - the correct form is then clear. So: “The star attractions at the museum were the art.” => “The star attractions were the art.” "The real draw of this restaurant are the desserts." => "The real draw is the desserts." "I cannot be one of the 61 million Americans who does not fill a prescription on time" => "61 million Americans [who] do not fill a prescription on time"
überRegenbogen Says:
8/15/2009 12:09:37 AM
Marie: In “I cannot be one of the 61 million Americans who do not refill their prescriptions on time.“, “do not“ is correct. You can break it down to “I cannot be one of them“, “them“ being “the 61 million Americans who do not refill their prescriptions on time“. The "who" who do not, are the 61 million—not the individual making the statement.
überRegenbogen Says:
8/14/2009 11:56:02 PM
“The star attractions at the museum were the art.” is a rather screwy example. If “art” was truly singular, equating it with the plural “star attractions” wouldn't jive—at least not in any intuitive way. It seems to me that “Art” is being treated as collective, here.
Marie Says:
8/14/2009 7:12:32 PM
Thank you so much for this explanation. I came to the website today because I wanted to confirm my understanding of this conundrum and it happened to be today's topic--no searching the website. It's so annoying to hear grammatical errors in TV ads. Today it was this sentence: "I cannot be one of the 61 million Americans who do not refill their prescriptions on time." Shouldn't it be, "I cannot be one of the 61 million Americans who does not fill a prescription on time"? Should "a" precede the word "prescription" or "his or her"?
Chiku Says:
8/14/2009 10:17:58 AM
Superb!

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