by Mignon Fogarty
Why Commas Matter
While writing Dashes, Parentheses, and Commas I missed an opportunity to explain the difference between a restrictive element and a nonrestrictive element. Silly me! The following sentences mean different things:
The monks, who were running, jumped aside. (nonrestrictive)
The monks who were running jumped aside. (restrictive)
It's all about the commas.
When “who were running” is in commas, it's a nonrestrictive element--an aside. It's describing the monks, which means every monk was running. You can leave it out and it doesn't change the core meaning of the sentence.
When “who were running” isn't in commas, it's a restrictive element -- it modifies the noun “monks.” Only some of the monks were running, and it was those running monks who jumped aside. Leaving it out would leave out important information about what happened.
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